Posted by Nick on August 11, 2007 at 22:50:49:
In Reply to: Bill Lee posted by FrankTRC on August 11, 2007 at 12:53:33:
I want to have my cake and eat it too (what a silly expression). I had a sort of love-hate relationship with the rhymes until I started noticing that some rhymes would slip by me causing me to do a double take. I especially enjoy when he inserts the rhyme within the sentence, as opposed to having it end each line. I guess I want the rhymes when they are not forced, and a bit subtle.